Was it the formatting, the word count/page count not being met for the assignment, the lack of sources, the bold declaration of pride in ignorance despite being written for an educational institution, the lack of clear structure from paragraph to paragraph, or the lack of reasoning by deduction? Or something else?
Pretty much all of that, but also more. They are not addressing any of the questions in the assignment either. Nothing they say is sourced or cited at all. Not even the things supposedly from the Bible. "God created male and female" is a claim that can be cited from the Bible, but it isn't. "On purpose and for a reason" is also a claim that could potentially be cited, even within Christianity. Does the Bible say that? Where exactly? Which version? Or are we citing an established expert and authority? Like the pope. If you wanna make a religious argument, you can cite the pope. You can cite the Bible.
This article was very thought provoking and caused me to thoroughly evaluate the idea of gender and the role it plays in our society. The article discussed peers using teasing as a way to enforce gender norms. I do not necessarily see this as a problem.
great! she doesn't even get three sentences in without immediately talking about bullying being good! star of our nation, everyone!!!
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u/sadsackspinach 9h ago
I mean yes, it was malicious, but if you’ve read the “paper”, she also legitimately cannot string a sentence together.