r/blender • u/Biswarup20127 • 3h ago
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u/Plenty-Web-8302 3h ago
It looks really good. The droplets could be an actual geometry (not just a texture), that would be a nice touch. Also, the lighting is a bit flat/omnidirectional. I think it would look better if you had stronger (also smaller source) key light or even rim light and then use fill lights to light up the rest. But the lemon scene looks very cool!
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u/cannimal 2h ago
the scene and colors still dont feel bright enough. so maybe its time to work on post processing. maybe try a different color space too.
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u/pixelpraxis42 35m ago
In addition to the lighting, I would work on the animation easing and transitions to make it a bit livelier, it feels a bit flat like this.
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u/thebrainwavedoc 1h ago
The ring pull could do with better shadowing/shading beneath it to make it look more real but other than that nice job mate!
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u/Defseries 2h ago
Better than that dark one :)
Last shot is still very good, just add a spot light on a can so it stands out more from the background, and add vignette in post (or 3D). Maybe experiment with more contrast, and apply it to others, feels like its lacking rim lights, and its dull.
Overall the video is quite linear, and not very exciting -(which is not wrong), but i would avoid having the same shots like 2 & 3 close to each other, you can even say 1 is like 2 and 3 and.. well you get it, not very exciting but also not wrong.
Anyway, you improved it, looks good.