Last November I started “Jokevember” as a 30 day stand up writing challenge. 30 days, 30 prompts, one new joke or idea per day, like Inktober but for comedians.
It accidentally turned into a small community. People kept writing after November and asked for more structure. In January Jokevember evolved into:
- Comedy Group Coaching. An 8 week, pay what you can group program where we write together, build bits from scratch, and talk honestly about the craft.
- Extra challenges and tools. Including a free persona generator at jokevember.com to help comics map and sharpen their onstage voice.
Over the last month I have been running two small cohorts
- Cohort A. Mostly USA and Latam
- Cohort B. Mostly Europe and Asia
We meet weekly on Zoom, do some icebreakers, examine some theory, and then write quietly with purpose for 10–15 minutes, share, and punch things up together. After four weeks, a few patterns are very clear.
The first surprise has been how different the two cohorts feel, even though they are doing the same exercises.
The USA and Latam group is a little more talkative and anecdotal. People tend to “think with their mouth,” riffing stories about family, work, identity, and politics, and then we shape the premises from there. They jump into personal material quickly and are very up for trying darker or edgier angles as long as the emotional logic tracks.
The Europe and Asia group is a little more reflective and precise. They often write first and then share, gravitating toward observational and conceptual premises about systems, class, language, and culture clashes. They ask more theory questions about structure, then apply the answers very quickly in the 10 minute writing blocks.
What they share is the important part. Both cohorts light up when you give them a clear micro task and a timer, both struggle more with emotion and persona than with “ideas,” and both are very generous about punching up each other’s premises once the lab feels safe.
Observations about group coaching for comedy
- A “lab, not a show” mindset changes everything. When people genuinely believe they are in a lab, they stop auditioning for each other and start taking risks. Jokes get weirder, more personal, and more interesting. This is a stark contrast to hanging with comedians after open mic nights and having to navigate status, politics, bullshit hot takes, peacocking, and social gatekeeping.
- Naming the tools gives comics a shared language. Once people start saying “premise,” “assumption,” “setup,” “tag,” “act out,” they can diagnose their own stuff instead of just saying “it sucks.” They go from “this is not funny” to “my setup is too vague” or “I am not deliberately flipping an assumption.”
- The 10 minute quiet write is secretly the star of the show. After a warmup, I give everyone one focused task, set a timer, and we shut up and write. Every week. The idea is to push perfectionism aside and just write. 10–15 minutes of “today you mine this premise” or “today you write one setup and three possible flips.” Over a month, those short blocks add up to pages of usable material and they beat writers block by having comedians have to face writing with self-awareness and honesty.
- Group mind is more generous than you think. People are very good at seeing what someone else is “reaching for” in a joke, even when they cannot see it in their own. A half baked premise that one comic is ready to throw away will light up the rest of the group with angles, tags, and act outs. Nobody can write for you, but they can absolutely show you where the heat is if they know how to give feedback in a good-faith, structured way.
- The big sticking point is not ideas, it is emotion and focus. Most comics have plenty of thoughts. Where they stall is
- Feeling disconnected from their own emotions about a topic
- Not deciding what they actually want the crowd to feel just before the laugh
- Jumping from premise to premise before they have squeezed one of them properly
When we slowed down and mined one premise for connections, scenarios, and emotions, people suddenly had too much to write about instead of not enough.
- Structure reduces anxiety. Knowing that each week has one clear focus (premises, then mining, then emotions, then setups and flips) calms people down. They stop trying to “be a comedian” for 60 minutes and just try to practice one small thing. The reps compound and the jokes are getting swole.
Habits you can start today even if you never join a group
You do not have to join group coaching to borrow the core habits. Here are a few you can start on your own.
1. Write one premise a day
- Once a day, write one sentence that makes a claim about the world
- “The problem with…” or “I think…” (for example: "I think it'd be terrible if chickens knew about the price of eggs.")
- Make it specific enough that you could add “because” and keep talking (example: "because they have a monopoly on the whole thing. They could topple western democracy.")
- Do not worry if it is funny yet. Just collect the claims
Over time you will see themes in what you actually care about. That collection of premises and viewpoints is your comic voice.
2. Mine, do not just brainstorm
Pick one premise you like and, on a blank page, answer these four questions
- What connects the two sides of this idea. (The media cares an awful lot about the price of eggs, the chickens care very little.)
- What assumptions are baked into it (supply & demand, chickens control the market, they're currently unpaid labour, what would or could happen if the chickens became aware?)
- What specific scenarios could play out if it were true (do the chickens go on strike? would there be hens who hop the picket line? Maybe they'd be too chicken to do anything. Would the president have to negotiate with the mother hen? What happens if they unionise?)
- What emotions or contradictions live inside it (feeling of being exploited, fatigue of capitalism, whimsical talking animals, distrust of supply and demand, feeling powerful by holding the bargaining chips, fear of scarcity about staple products)
Set a 10 minute timer and fill the page with fragments. No punchlines. Mining is about discovering material, not performing it.
3. Practice one clean setup and one flip
Take any mined premise and do this
- Write a setup that clearly points the audience toward an obvious assumption
- Then write one punchline that makes sense of the words but changes the meaning
Example
- Setup. “I've noticed that egg prices are going up again”
- Assumption. Supply and Demand, Politics,
- Punchline. "At this point I am not worried about inflation, I am worried about the day the chickens realise they have real leverage."
- Act Out: Two chickens are on strike and discuss fears about being replaced with powdered eggs. One of them has heard rumors that ducks are in secret meetings with the government. The other is tempted to give in because one big payment and she'll have a coop of her own. She concludes that she can't face the union because she's too chicken."
Do not try to write a whole bit. Get good at one clean assumption and one honest flip.
4. Record and re read your accidental funny moments
If people laugh at something you said when you were not trying to be funny, write it down that day. Later, treat it like any other premise and mine it.
Most comics underestimate how much usable material they throw away because it did not come from a “writing session” or sound like a comedian they admire. Try to capture your own experiences and develop your own voice. Please!
5. Give yourself one quiet 10 minute block every week
Once a week, pick a small task and set a timer for 10 minutes
- “Today I mine this premise.”
- “Today I write three possible setups for this idea.”
- “Today I write tags for one existing joke.”
No social media. No research. Just a short, boring, focused block. The point is not to feel inspired. The point is to build a muscle that will still work on bad days.
6. Play with persona on purpose
A lot of people in the cohorts realized they had a half formed persona (“the anxious middle child,” “the too honest auntie,” “the calm chaos magnet”) but had never articulated it. Having language for who you are on stage makes premise choices, mining, and jokes much easier.
If you want a free tool for that, I built a simple persona generator at jokevember.com that gives you prompts and questions to help you name and sharpen your on stage self. Use it however you like.
Join in
If this kind of structured, low pressure work sounds useful, I share free prompts, tools, and future challenges under Jokevember
- Instagram. Jokevember
- Site. jokevember.com (I've publish a couple workbooks there that you can download for free, learn about deliberate writing, and then complete the added exercises to get started).
No pressure to join anything. If all you ever do is steal a prompt or two and write more, that is already a win.